Feedback:
The presentation should have built up to be a slow reveal of the project including research and initial ideas that perhaps were wrong and explanations why you went in a different direction.
The logo is something the as a group we mainly focused on however it was noticed by the DBA team as they suggested we should have developed into more areas as we had started to do this with mockups of interiors.
They were confused as to how our logo explicitly showed approachable technology and this is perhaps because as a group we were caught up with the concept that we didnt show it as clearly. Although overall they enjoyed the concept of approachable technology and our enthusiasm for the alpha document, science and the project itself.
From the feedback we received at the end of the day the winning team seemed to spend a lot of time working, this meant that they managed their time efficiently and gave each group member a task which we unfortunately didn't and it made working as a group incredibly difficult as I in particular didn't feel as though as I was contributing as much as I would like to have done. As a group our concept worked well within the presentation but I believe this is a learning point for myself as a designer, as I haven't complete many collaborative projects. I need to work on more collaborations and with different people who have different skill sets.
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